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Open Poetry #40

forgiving love

MarkG
Junior Member

since 2007-06-21

Posts 48
California USA

0 posted 2007-06-24 07:03 PM

forgiving love

walking down along this familiar shore
I wonder where you are
looking hard into the darkness
far beyond the shining stars
I wish you here beside me
walking late along the pier
there will always be this space
an empty place without you near

having come so far
having the need to find this place again
missing all the certain love of a best and only friend
pier lights glow along the waves
a deep and restless sea
reminding of a past
that was never meant to be

I hope you find your peace
and all you were dreaming of
never forget the beauty
of such a pure and forgiving love

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-06-24 07:06 PM

so very romantic and beautiful.

enjoyed

blue face
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 92

2 posted 2007-06-24 07:27 PM

Liked this poem
But did you lose a loved one?

Sarah

MarkG
Junior Member

since 2007-06-21

Posts 48
California USA

3 posted 2007-06-24 07:53 PM

yep...her name was Cindy...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2007-06-25 09:13 PM

sad stuff...bittersweet write

hope you are doing okay

MindBodySoul
Member

since 2007-01-10

Posts 196
NJ

5 posted 2007-06-27 05:38 PM

I am left speechless with your words... such depth, sadness, and beauty... waht a combination... Loved It!!!

Thank you for sharing my friend...
I enjoyed it... felt the connection immediately!

Jen--->MindBodySoul

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

6 posted 2007-06-27 06:27 PM

very heartfelt, I could feel the longing, grabbing me and reaching out to me as a reader.

~ARH

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

7 posted 2007-06-28 06:25 AM

Mark... these are heartfelt words for the loss of your love... enjoyed RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

ladylisa
Member

since 2007-04-29

Posts 342
Florida USA

8 posted 2007-06-28 02:28 PM

Amazing and so true.

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