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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
one cat’s tongue, he whined as he sailed on paper seas no more letters left in the alphabets of creativity yon rows the crew of others waves breaking o’er their bow like pardoned spill-waters pour off rills of the brow no wind, he muttered slyly as if to coyly say ‘tis the fault of all that’s regular that words won’t come his way out on the sea of vast vistas laden with promises of inspirations his dingy dallies, his sails vacate and drafts of zephyrs drift imitations across the dust-bowls of his mind and sagebrush dance like debutantes whose beaus forgot their time |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Great imagery here... It's not uncommon to find one'self speechless. |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"no more letters left in the alphabets of creativity" I disagree, this piece is extremely creative. Enjoyed! always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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jak Member
since 2007-03-14
Posts 85Charlotte, NC |
very living language. Jak |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Steaven~ Don't ask ... but you certainly gave me a smile here - 'his dingy dallies'  LOVE IT !! *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
TD, thank you so kindly...humbled by your comments... Janette, feel free to disagree...you do it so agreeably jak, thank you for the kind remarks Marge...tsk, tsk Marge, no more for you...you have had enough  thanks for the funny...you made my day! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"across the dust-bowls of his mind and sagebrush dance like debutantes whose beaus forgot their time" this is so perfect it almost hurts! wow! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
thank you, The Lady...that was my favorite line as well... |
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