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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Tremble Hanging by a heartbeat Untangled, unfettered Unforgettable Lightning captured One continuous wave Flows unstoppable Standing on end Every fiber screams A silent sea The mind follows In helpless ecstasy Awash in images A perfect fall The soul dives Wanting madness In the silence Cascades of feeling Pulsing river Electric waters Of deepest dreams Crest gold Copyright Kkh 2/13/07 |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
oh girl, love your tremble...been there and enjoyed the view.... wonderfully expressed...the images are so profoundly felt the wonder of love |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ThisDiamond, Can't say it better than LeeJ. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
can't believe I missed this earlier ... lovely words |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"A perfect fall The soul dives Wanting madness"  An Addiction. Great write TD. JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
it's all so beautiful TD so... perfect |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
WOW!!! awesome! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
perfect...every word! |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Diamond your poem sparkles. Lovely and enjoyed |
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