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soul snip (the michael poems)
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soul snip (the michael poems) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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when first I saw you a light streak across endless expanse rowdy little soul snip you were then, pausing, bending, through timeless cycles of always ~ michael your soul snip always ago you knew me but couldn’t catch me I felt what waited in your heart saw what could happen if clouds opened I was drawn up kept my eyes on those clouds ducked and flew hid in lavender folds of time yes outmaneuvered you but we both knew it would happen just not now which of us was ready? I didn’t have to pound nails into my feet to discover pain hurts just wait for those clouds to open you to spy me a light streak across endless expanse caught …done |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady Very expressive, enjoyed the read.  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Sir Sy I always appreciate your comments  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ "I felt what waited in your heart" ~ "hid in lavender folds of time" Just a sampling of why I enjoy reading you, Lady Kate!  Linda |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Lady Kate... exquisite!!  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn can I say that? just in awe, once again |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Truly captivating writing! In the midst of winter, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady A piece of you is clear in this, how else could it cause the ache I feel. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you dear Linda Angel Roniece thank you my friend  awww Dixie thank you thank you so much Nancy you felt that ache did you Martie? yup it’s there sigh... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I do believe you caught this flight of fanciful directly from Pan, himself. This...is marvelous! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
ah Karilea... I think I did catch it from Pan it just flew into my mind... thank you |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"hid in lavender folds of time" I adored this line, too. These michael poems ... ohhhhh gosh ... I am so enjoying them. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Janette I so appreciate you reading and commenting |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You share yourself with such expressive beauty - yes, that ache weaves through your words. You continue to move me with your writing. Alison |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this...James |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Delicate... but oh so strong. MoonShadow . |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
awesome, very touching My spirit will rise |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you so much Alison thank you James thank you gentle Sir Moonshadow MGROVES… thank you |
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