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leaving home/ going home
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leaving home/ going home |
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xrayzerase Junior Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 10usa |
going back tomorrow-been with my parents since thursday. feeling sad. how dumb. i am long "grown-up" so-just writing...fixed typos-think i got them all... not a poem-just-words: to open up soft on sand sand burrowing deep down warm into feathers held soft like covers deep inside wombing wombing that window yes...same window holding out the scent of air at the great price of loss preparations my dearest makings a bridging of birth to life of sending away all pilings of days building growing just enough til the fledgeling feels air high undertaking speaking slowly as if dying lively as if singing fledgeling time will fly must fly but be aware aware or the loss will crush you each day all days passed through during and along your flight. your flight, as always, you see, is loss and tomorrow you must leave home to go home. and start again. ............... [This message has been edited by xrayzerase (02-10-2007 10:58 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you'll be fine  |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
xrayzerase...A thinking poem which is the type I like best. Enjoyed...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"burrowing deep down warm into feathers held soft like covers deep inside wombing" It is good to go home again at times I wish I could just to feel this way, warm and safe. As always, love your words. Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
xrayzerase A breeze I have sensed before. Enjoyed |
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JeffD Junior Member
since 2007-02-06
Posts 28CT |
I am glad I still live at home, well at least for another year. But I liked your poem a lot. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderfully written! believe in what your heart feels... |
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xrayzerase Junior Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 10usa |
thank you all so much. i wanted -lastnight-to delete this. i was so in my head and not thinking clearly. i was so worried i'd read this tomorrow (today now) and find i am once again too negative or "only venting" i do need to put only "poems" up that i let sit -not write them direcctly on here as if taking notes. i suppose i still just don't think of myself as a writer--i write-to add to my artwork--but-not used to --well-i'm not really a poet or any of that--but i am still glad to be here. now that i am home-i can read others work. i want to know others work-otherwise-why join.. (?)  anyway--ok-thanks |
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