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THe Errant Knight
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THe Errant Knight |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Repost: The Errant Knight The armor that I wear has kinks Except the part that’s linked with links My battles show a heavy toll And still I do not reach my goal In heavens name how far the end And how much can my armor bend My sward is full of nicks and dull My shield begins to show the hull These windmills that I charge today Are built anew a different way And time weaves cobwebs on the deed There’s just so much of blood to bleed So I have taken plight in night In magic and in dreamer’s slight I walk within a garden green And pluck the flowers of this scene And God I’ve grown a temp of grace That fills the echoes of my space |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
kinks, I'd say a petty cost all the marks of battles fought some were won, some were lost but none of them were for naught love your kinks dear Sy |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
me too Sir Sy!  wonderful! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ And God I’ve grown a temp of grace That fills the echoes of my space ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ And it's God's will you share with us The battle scars that you earned thus So we may know that childish rage May someday come a wisdom's sage |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, "love your kinks dear Sy" Does that mean you think I'm Kinky. LOL  RDB, Your wonderful means alot. Thank you Ivor, Always enjoy your wise and poetic replies. Thank you my friend. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
read your comment above,  Don't think your kinky at all, but...you do have a marvelous smile in all your poetry...Sorry to hear your not feeling well, if I may suggest an old fashioned remedy, Lots of vicks on the chest, with a hand towel pinned over top...do not go out with the vicks on, cuz people will want to get away from you. Thank you for this lovely poem... Happy Sunday |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ It's not the cold that gets me it's the coughing. Thanks and stay well. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
why of course you're not kinky that would be Randy! you Sir Sy are a rock carefully placed among the flowers rough winds may shake the darling buds of May but the rock holds steady... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady And you are the kindest of kind.  |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Listen, Don Quixote, the day you stop tilting at those windmills, is the day you die...so fight on for your Dulcinea...whoever she may be!  Bea |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Sir Knight! I find the bold and errant knight aspect of you to be quite charming. However, I am most taken by the side that plucks the flowers while walking in a garden green.  I gift thee, Sir Knight, with a bouquet of forever-lasting lilacs. EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bea, You are right and I see them in the east I must once more charge those wind mill beasts. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Are you saying you are a kinky knight?  No way..not our Sy guy.   & , NancyIn the midst of winter, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel I accept your kind gift. Nancy, No it was Passing that said she loved the kinks in my armor. LOL |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
It's a Wise Knight who see's his flaws! Great, inspired write! Robert |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
great write...wise is the knight who realizes the windmills change with age... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Robert, Thank you for the read and kind reply. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
steavenr Keen observation and thanks for the comment |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy... kinks are links some of them stink, but the dandy in Randy gives flowers the power.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie Thank you sweetie I think you're right. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote:  My indisputable magician indeed that is what you are. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine You are a love.  |
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