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Power Blue Words |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Whirling wind of a mind, Set free to sail its spirit, Writing currents of thoughts, Levitating words as gemmed Characters waving on lines, Upon horizontal definitions. Hues defined colored imagery, Brush stokes upon a canvas, So black ’n white upon a page, Releasing a rainbow painting. Emerald Gulf’s sailing sunset, Under powder blue pink skies. Somewhere on Panama Beach David L. Young 02/09/07 © De-Terminated poet, somewhere in America not on company time |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such spirit in this write, beautiful imagery. If I may... Your concluding line is lost with the copyright so close...could detract from the final impact. Too pretty to lose momentum. Happy to read you. TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's a beautiful view indeed |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My own spirit was set free to sail the whirling currents of your poet painter's mind!  Thanks for the up-lifting view ~ and ride!  EA |
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