Open Poetry #40 |
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Sidewalks |
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grl2dream New Member
since 2007-02-10
Posts 2 |
Sidewalks Broken sidewalks and empty dreams My life ripped at the seams No direction or signs to follow I was alone and hollow I didn't know where to start When you walked into my heart You found me standing there and offered a shoulder to spare I cried my last tear And fought my biggest fear With my love at stake I've left myself open to heartbreak I struggle everyday But I won't let you get away Something in your green eyes Gives me butterflies With that sweet grin you steal the air within Leaving me breathless to your touch Your gentle words mean so much Mended sidewalks and vivid dreams Growing stronger at the seams Things I thought I'd never see You've lead me to where I want to be.... |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Welcome to passions...I really feel you here...I was there too soon ago. I like your referene to his green eyes....I too know someone with green eyes that needs sidewalks mended!!! Hope you enjoy the site I love it!!!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions. Pleased to read you. TD |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello and welcome to Passions In Poetry. I hope you enjoy your time here. I enjoyed your poem and rhyme scheme. Hugs, Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful writing welcome to Passions! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
you steal the air within Leaving me breathless to your touch wow! a beautiful entrance into our blue pages - Welcome! ![]() Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
good first poem |
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