Open Poetry #40 |
Rapture |
trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
I dreamed of a woman under the stars in a midnight sky so blue... where love was a rapture we two did capture, our passions on angel's wings flew! Our love was demanding, fulfilling, exciting! The time was endless... forever! Love beyond mortals, athwart Heaven's portals, such blandishments joyous and clever! Love was dimension beyond time and space with senses so richly relating... continuum unknown, yet entered, eternity's own being, centered. On fleecy clouds soaring, elating. Never descending, love's ecstasies bending to wills brought out of our depths... on fantasies, well richly reeling with rioting, glorious feeling. We ascended with grand-labored breaths! Poetry is just the evidence of life. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
E X Q U I S I T E ! ! Another keeper Bill! Well done indeed. In the midst of winter, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very hot! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
hot and dreamy... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
LOVELY!! Nice job Bill. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh my! ooh la laa!! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such passion and such ecstacy of view. Enjoyed this very much. |
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grl2dream New Member
since 2007-02-10
Posts 2 |
what a romantic Great poem...loved it |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Thanks everyone for their comments.. |
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