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Light Fantastic
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Light Fantastic |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Light Fantastic ~*Marge Tindal*~ Waltz with me through the night Carousel turns in prismed light Kaleidoscopic hues shine bright Lift me to heart-warming height Drift me loved in starlit clime Gift me daily with care sublime Hold me soft in whispered rhyme Light fantastic words feel fine |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Fantastic is a gr8 word for this work  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
And these words are fantastic Marge!!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Just lovely Marge. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautiful writing....enjoyed |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
This is really pretty! love, Barb (Happy New Year!) |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Awsome! The title says it all |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Charming poem and beautifully done, as usual! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Thank you for sharing this whispered rhyme that sounds so fine! Marge, yours is a fantastic gift full of Light!  Loving Light, EO  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Marge! Made me want to trip the light fantastic! Hugs & love you. In the midst of winter, |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Fantastic Marge! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
it waltzed me Marge beautiful! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You are just a dynamo.  |
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Devious Intellectual Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 112 |
liked how this was done, its veryyyy nice toooo thanks for sharingggg |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Loved this one Marge...thanks!  Bea |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
You make me dream, too. Lovely...light...fantastic! |
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PatAngel Member
since 2004-04-05
Posts 451California |
Wonderfully written! Loved your beautiful poem. Patricia 'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Hold me soft in whispered rhyme just lovely words here my sweet Marge! RDB |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
much enjoyed! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Sounds like a perfect image of Marge Tindal! Beautiful write, as you always do. JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is so cool |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
How in this world I let this go by without proper thanks is beyond me ... but please know that I do appreciate the replies~ I love to traipse though word-thoughts as they flutter around me~ THANK YOU ALL !!  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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