Open Poetry #40 |
Prayer Seep |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Prayer Seep ~*Marge Tindal*~ There is a man of worded phrase permeating the praying space of my heart these days He would think it obvious that I would feel his vibes moving through the all of me though he's not by my side His thoughts reach out and touch me I willingly await the come for all he is ... for all he will be leaves me quite undone I know a man a special man who sees the good of others but often refuses to see his own This is a man this is a man that I would most often find seeping in at unexpected times to occupy my mind Loved is this man that I know and I am proud to say he is the friend of me in a most inspiring way Lips move in prayer for one man on this day I know a man a special man who causes me to pray And ... so I do for me for you ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Oh wow....this brings tears to my eyes. Thank you Marge, for this and for....lots of things. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis...your vision travels so far beyond what eyes see ...I love this gift of love, and you!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beyond beautiful Marge! So very very uplifting. Thank you so much for this Love you, Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling one, an incredible piece darling one, as always your words fall like kisses on a soul, lifting the clouds that obscure light and bathing in true wonder. Oh how I wish I had one thimbleful of your talent darling heart You just know I love your writing don’t you? like you forever Mushy x x x x x x x Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, An inspiration to read. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Your words touch the soul deeply....Absolutely beautiful...**big hugs** |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
Great rhythm and rhyme Marge..... Keep that poetic pen busy. Very inspirational. Love and peace, Maggie ((~.~)) |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was stunning, and kept me smiling all the way through, cuz I know a man, just like that...smiles and hugs.... for such a beautiful poem |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Such a generous and loving rendering, Marge. *hugs*...jo |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: A lucky man is he to have a friend like you!! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
Marge, I feel the sentiment in your words, on very few occasions I have felt a bonding strong enough to transcend the mere physical and hold these feelings for another. This is not love in the physical sense of things, but a joining of souls and understanding, respect for another, that whilst you do not always agree with their words you can respect them and absorb the reasoning behind their conclusions. Look at these conclusions and possibly in some way be stronger for the experience. A very strong piece of poetry summing up what spiritual friendship is all about, Namaste, Ivor [This message has been edited by ivordavies (02-06-2007 06:58 PM).] |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
I feel the exact same way. I love you Marge You have my heart. Your poetry is the most esquisite. Hugs Kimberly |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A joy to read...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
awesome Marge... |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Marge this is simply beautiful! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sometimes words come ... because they are 'meant' to be shared ... this was obviously one of those times~ Daily ... for you for me for the all who are of need~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I know a man a special man who sees the good of others but often refuses to see his own That's what friends are for, dear lady... to shove a mirror in his path. *S* How I love the loving heart of you! *S* |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
And thanks to you, m'lady, for bringing this back. Wonderful then, wonderful now.....wonderful poem. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SuthernLady ... and my RatMan ... ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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