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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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I am do you not see I am more critical of myself than you could ever be and now that we are telling the truth here is a secret here are a few… you are right about thoughts of me but you are also wrong I wish I knew things and wish I could forget things that I do know I do throw myself into everything and hide behind my daily work and I am not afraid and I am afraid I am afraid of searching in darkness and when alone sleep with lights on and afraid that where I am I don’t belong and that I belong where I am not and I am at times just pure raw emotions but I am yes, I am “all romantics meet the same fate”…Joni Mitchell |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful outpouring of thoughts here Helen.  In the midst of winter, |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"and afraid that where I am I don’t belong and that I belong where I am not" agreed... it is wonderful |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
very resonant,strong write with a powerful finish...good demanding read... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Yes, you are  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady You are what you are and that's what you are. But we do  |
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