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souls comfort zone
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souls comfort zone |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA 
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for so long a comfort filled my heart and mind guarding my dreams all through the night seemed like I'd never lose my souls comfort zone then like a thief 'twas all ripped from me said to search then I'd be free into the darkness to wise up to the light seeing only twisted fears in the twilight recapturing the faith that I thought I'd lost knowing all too well my souls too high a cost ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Ahhhh...now, this, is a binding compliment. Enjoying this.  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
nicely written... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely penned Julie...much enjoyed!  In the midst of winter, |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
beautiful, poignant write...enjoyed...especially loved the ending... |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Thank you all for ooyur replies..I have been struggling lately...all my poems aren't necassarilly about me.....this however is. ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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