Open Poetry #40 |
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Vespers |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California ![]() |
Vespers A candle with its taper burning has gone to fill the moon in the dark I see it light the patio to vesper's room taking distance with melted tongue hark the whisper so begun Weaving in the window’s lore for more I enter out of sleep and keep to path that was invisible to touch of skin and sleight of time releasing feather’s flight of rhyme Away my darling lullaby I’ve song enough within my womb the rhythm holds warm canopy with trust it weaves without perfume I feel the tender opening remembering the seed planting the moon the sun the rain include a door that means vicissitude No weeping walk of solitude can take away the knowing darn where swaying threads proclaim the night and in the dark enlighten sight |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It must be February. It must be love. ![]() |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Softly beautiful dear Martie. ![]() In the midst of winter, |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Every line as hypnotic as the title Marti. TD |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This is so beautiful....vespers indeed. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
sweetly sung your evensong Martie lovely... |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Have you put this to music? I could hear it, and it was simply beautiful Martie. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"...touch of skin and sleight of time releasing feather’s flight of rhyme" Very well done! ![]() |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
you draw me into seeing love that has no bounds Martie - Paul |
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