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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Taken for granted displaced along a cord the reason for a call comes through a wire carbon encased receiver a voice from another world touched those fringes taken for granted edges from rest to life taken in by imagined looks hypnotized by choice she stumbles in the mirror so much to say so little time to dance hypnotised catwalks displaced on stages reason for why they love a hope for fleeting stares touched those fringes taken for granted skin edges on in the night she stumbles from stage to potato chip floors they were occupied with naked yearnings her view taken for granted. Afraid to look some kind of magnetic at a glance language that furtive glance that takes you away leaves the body behind from wondeful, beautiful false and uncaring touches and caresses taken for granted the wanted obsession afraid to look from without to within taken for granted taken advantage of another club girl |
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TSC Junior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 31Canada |
A disorienting string of images, yet you tie them together into something very... satisfying. Strange poem. Very nice too. Much enjoyed. |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
And I am all to aware of the message here....just another club girl;..to the boys ya know.... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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