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The Howl of Snow
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The Howl of Snow |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
The Howl of Snow The thought of words have eddied between the east and west of belief as if an ocean might lie between sunrise and sunset but you do not live in a grass skirted dream and I no longer reside among the clam-diggers so here it is then, my hidden formed thoughts of you, from somewhere in the dream you left in the snow ~&~ It seems you come to me, in mid-moon, when tides are level and you leave upon the rise when Luna’s surges emerge strong And it was that other night when sky views splayed my dreams between Luna, clouds, and snowflakes and the wolf’s howling when in some oh dark light, some part of me came to the window peering into the moment of sight of pseudo footsteps towards my door ~&~ if you could have held me then when I was holding my own breath waiting for the tonal ring of love upon this porch of dream if you could have held me then you would have heard the howl of wolf.  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady...the sound and feel of this is so haunting, so full of longing...so beautiful. I think love itself must hear the footsteps on a night such as this.  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Ah, lady, you do this so very well.... I get the feeling that on some moon-drenched summer night, you could lie down in the grass and make snow-angels out of pure moonlight, that would stay until the morning sun melted them away. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*keeping this in my library* Love it! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you resurrect love in such a way, with a deep, deep brilliance...oozing with spirituality...one of the finest...like a great elm.... whoa...just whoa...exceptional write |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
had I held you close at some time in your life whether day or night there would be gentle purring before the howl of the wolf Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
great talent...you are blessed. ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hauntingly beautiful Lady~ Please don't stay away so long. In the midst of winter, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This, milady is so very delicate and exquisite, and so very beautiful. So pleased to see you writing, again, m'friend.  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"if you could have held me then you would have heard the howl of wolf." Oh Lady! This is wonderful! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Lady, you have returned home!  "if you could have held me then you would have heard the howl of wolf." ~ Befitting closing words to a compelling piece of writing! Well done, m'lady! Loving Light, EA |
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