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Open Poetry #40

Mono No Aware

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-02-01 09:31 PM

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A winter path
Over snow
Between two hills

On whose slopes
Slender birches
With upraised limbs
As if they were despaired

A crimson tint
On the horizon line
Above the sky
A clouded blue

It doesn’t matter
Where you go
One hears
No bird song in the air

Only the sounds
Of stoic plodding on
Branches creaking
In the cold

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Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2007-02-01 10:16 PM

Tis the season, Huan.

I appreciate your writings.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

2 posted 2007-02-02 12:59 PM

We gotta get you to a warmer place...before your very soul freezes up there!

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iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2007-02-02 01:00 AM

Just the very reason I live in the south! Enjoyed.

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

4 posted 2007-02-02 08:30 AM

Thanks all

And no worry
I was moving in mood through the scene
in a painting.

Thanks again

John

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2007-02-02 01:18 PM

desolate but gorgeous

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2007-02-03 05:32 AM

that's it for sure...wish I had taken my camera with me yesterday to have taken some beautiful tree shots.

M

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