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Not in Rhyme
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Not in Rhyme |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England 
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Not in Rhyme This cannot rhyme, I must try change, my verse I’ll try to re-arrange. Oh hell, I know, I’ve made it rhyme, my pen’s the culprit every time! I’ll try once more to write this poem without a rhyme to keep it flowin’. I don’t believe I cannot do it, there really should be nothing to it! There’s something wrong within my head, I should take heed of what I said. I said, “I mustn’t rhyme this time”, but rhyme’s in every bloody line! Well I give in, I am not clever, my poetry will rhyme forever. I’ll never make a decent poet, if it’s not rhyme… I just can’t show it! Ivor G Davies The moment created this second, is a moment that's going to last. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ivor~ I happen to think that good lines of ink are spilled in perfected rhyme Yet and still ... I know I will prefer it every time~ That's just how I hear it flow syncopated words ... as they go one by one ... or two by two I'm just a rhyming fool like you~ Hope you like my little grin and you take it on the chin for that's the silly mood I'm in when rhyming is where I've always been~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ivor, It only shows you don't like chaos. LOL |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
Marge, At last another poet who doesn't really know it that rhyming ain't in fashion anymore. Free verse is really cool and it's only an old fool who doesn't see it really is a bore! But oldies all unite we can put up quite a fight I even know a granny who can rap. For to ears so old you see well the rest is just to me Nothing but a garbled pile of... ....beautifully worded free verse. Seymour, Chaos, I LOVE Chaos, to me it is the only truly organized thing I can find my way in! (Comes of being an Operations Manager) I am only truly comfortable when things are changing, it is the only stability I know... Ivor |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Keep on rhymin' Ivor, not a thing wrong with it. Wish I could do it better. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
I saw an orange today and was reminded of Earl in a way. If she ever gets fat she could just look like that, but then she might just roll away! Thank you for admiring my rhyme, your a gentleman outside your time, a throwback to old when all stories told where written to match every line. As carrots and ancients 'come out' you may wonder what it's all about But rhyme twists your mind is what you will find especially when Earl meets a sprout! |
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