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JLHunter
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0 posted 2007-02-01 08:07 AM

The Sun Trilogy, Part I

Autumn Sun

The wind howls in fright,
As darkened skies cloak the sun.
Winter's wrath threatens.

The sun slinks away
--Ashamed by its dimming light--
Saving strength for spring.

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

Marge Tindal

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1 posted 2007-02-01 08:19 AM

OhJohn~
I really like what you've done here~
Off to see the others~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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JLHunter
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2 posted 2007-02-01 09:18 AM

Thanks, Marge!

I worked hard on this theme to make the "trilogy" flow properly. I'm glad that you liked part I...

Love, John

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

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3 posted 2007-02-01 01:37 PM

John, I felt the grey skies, the darkness, and even the cold...maybe cuz I was just outside? Just kidding...this was indeed an imprint on the readers mind.

wonderful

sewasham
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since 2006-09-11

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4 posted 2007-02-01 07:39 PM

Nice work John. I'm off to read the rest. Take care and Have fun. Steve

Sunshine

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5 posted 2007-02-01 08:03 PM

Now, you knew well that I would gravitate towards your poems....

and these have enforced the need for me to write a poem that has been swirling around in my head. Thank you for the kick!

JLHunter
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6 posted 2007-02-01 08:19 PM

Thanks, LeeJ.

I was hoping to invoke some vivid imagery. I'm glad that you enjoyed my little solar works.

John

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

JLHunter
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7 posted 2007-02-01 08:19 PM

Thanks, Steve.

Enjoy!

John

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

JLHunter
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8 posted 2007-02-01 08:21 PM

Hi, Sunshine.

Sorry for enticing you so. I can't help it! It's who I am...

John

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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9 posted 2007-02-01 08:21 PM

John.... how lovely! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JLHunter
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10 posted 2007-02-01 08:37 PM

Thanks, RDB.

I'm happy to hear that!

John

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

The Lady
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11 posted 2007-02-02 05:11 PM

powerful work John
I can feel it...

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