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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA 
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Playful nymph proves strenghth is but a word By sensual movement in rythmic grace Strongest mens convictions now prove absurd Lost amidst this flesh; this face Hair of Ambrosia and earthen eyes Full ripened lips moistened with dewy wine Divinely faceted figure without compromise Flawless skin made of porcelain, most fine And yet, now another facet is placed In innumerable layers lay untold emotions Depth of soul; the physical relplaced Exquisite beauty in thought and untold devotions Evolving in endless parades of seasons Not spewed forth in empty vanity Full implication and flawless reason Breath of life; Breath of sanity Unbound with logic's cold intent Unfettered by religious misguided words Deaf to empty and unfelt repent Out of step with the mindless herd In more than image the mask retreats Which beauty to honor is a difficult choice Here in her soul the elegance repeats In fathoms of thought, I hear her voice For, in her words... the compassionate being Honesty of experience; emotion of thought Vision of love, bound with a mothers seeing Education of life, that can never be taught Herein beauty exists in mirrored reflection Outward and inward in all the right places Please, am I that she has allowed this detection For more radiant is this creature with twin, exquisite, faces Poetry is just the evidence of life. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Hair of Ambrosia and earthen eyes Full ripened lips moistened with dewy wine Divinely faceted figure without compromise Flawless skin made of porcelain, most fine" oh well now Bill this lady is incredibly exquisite and beautiful of soul too? well done |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Absoluetly Herein beauty exists in mirrored reflection Outward and inward in all the right places Please, am I that she has allowed this detection For more radiant is this creature with twin, exquisite, faces |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
mmmm.... wonderful! RDB |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this type of rhyming has always been hard for me, so I admire those who have it mastered |
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