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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. before again at dawn the first light to I before the body recalls its weight what it will and will not use to see itself distinct there is only one being without dream unbounded by any thought of time or any thing imaginable except a sense that in this formless state of nascent endlessness there is . . . who is and how it should be . |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"there is . . . who is and how it should be" excellent work John |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Lady, Thank you A difficult write for how does one describe what is ineffable beyond its negatives? Thanks again John |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
perfect  |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
and how it is. ::smiles:: nice very nice |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Speed bumps be damned, I still wish I'd written this....and I may try my hand at it, one of these days. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thanks Ed, I think the difference is where you see a bump I intended a hard stop. It was a difficult piece because it had to be written very low key and without image or comparison. Thanks again. John . |
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