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Cycle of Life |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England 
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Cycle of Life When ‘whole’ splits down to form anew, you are reborn, but remain too. You take your baggage back to earth, although forgotten, at your birth. When ‘life’ is run and you return, with all that in the flesh you learn. Then your rebirth should feed the ‘whole’, as you again share common soul. So angels, humans all are one, it matters not, where what is done. You'll carry all well past the grave, it's just one part of ‘life’ you played. So coming, going, all the same.... our lifetime’s part of greater game. Be sure you’re not returned to hell, enjoy your life, but live it well! Ivor G Davies ------------------------------------------------------------------ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How true...how true. I think I indeed carry a heavy karma.  In the midst of winter, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ivor, I think we are all on that bicycle. Good write enjoyed the read. |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Ivor I liked this poem..This was just a 3 minute write i did where I trembled of the thought dieing and going back to earth. I do see your point and you did a nice job on the poem My luggage is heavy I no longer wish to hold Like a bad hand played, yes i wish to fold. If I ever returned back to this friggin earth I would shoot my next mother that gave me birth. Nothing in this world again I wish to Share Being recarnated back to earth is so unfair Most people would think it would be a delight Try to take me back you will get a fight. Heaven when I die will be the place for me Heaven sounds like a wonderful place to be So let me die and go to my rightful place Where I can worship god and fell his grace |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
trutodaraiders My poem actually gives you the best of both worlds...... ====================================== When ‘whole’ splits down to form anew, you are reborn, but remain too. ====================================== and you are supposed to contribute something to the 'whole' and leave your baggage behind! Your poetry, however, shows your justified concerns. I personally feel that our earthly life is for personal development...... Ivor |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Be sure you’re not returned to hell, enjoy your life, but live it well!" ~ I've been to hell and I ain't goin' back!  I'm living my life to the best of my ability and hopefully I am building lots of good karma that will hold me in good stead for the next time around!  Your words resonate with my beliefs as well! Love makes the world go 'round, and 'round, and 'round... Linda |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
Linda, I am sure we have a lot of rational in common! |
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