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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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I remain unwritten days go by so fast I know the words are there somewhere scrambled in the past. The 9 to 5 is painful and always leaves something lacking and memories through glass bottles don't seem to be worth tracking. So I live in blank pages while the stars shine bright and it takes all I have to pull this out tonight. |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
So I live in blank pages while the stars shine bright and it takes all I have to pull this out tonight. Ahhh...,little sister the mystery is there inside you screaming for realese,let go and write the dreams you fear others will not understand you will I think be pleasently surprised at what you find! blessings
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such a vivid rendering. Your talent continues to clarify, in such a wonderful way. TD |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
you did pull it out Dixie and pulled it out well... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
So I live in blank pages while the stars shine bright and it takes all I have to pull this out tonight. Yes, I like these lines too... well done Ms Dixie  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Beautifully poignant. I loved this shadows!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks ladies  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh my, this is exactly my situation, writing is stuck in there somewhere. but it sure looks like you pulled it out somehow, anyway. This is beautiful. Sandra |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Dixie friend I often gaze at the moon and starlight when I feel the need to write , you filled in the blank page perfectly Hope |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You have now written "the unwritten". No one can keep a good poet down! The words eventually come spilling out again! ~ and you have done so, very well! Linda |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Here latley I have found myself struggling for words, and i can forsee myself posting here less and less. I truly applaud your poem, and i know that you have written boocoos of poems. This poem does shines bright light on the talents you have when you steer from free verse..you got the talent in both worlds |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Ms. Dixie I came looking for more of your work and picked this, lo and behold, to find that you have penned my thoughts. I've had mind-block for so long that I struggle to get one piece a year written now... but how lucky I am to get to read your work, and have you speak my thoughts from your pen! Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks friends I know this is something we all can relate to, being poets thanks for the inspiration |
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