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Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 2007-01-06 01:06 PM

In filtering sunlight through a film, particulates of dust
enhance the spectrum we behold, our sight do we entrust?
For magic has revealed its' hand through fingers splayed in light,
as questions entertained at dawn replace the fading night.

"What spell is this that has been cast?" In lieu of a reply,
are wisps of clouds transformed to flame to captivate the eye.
In times long past did wizards seek to claim the power of dawn
while royalty and common folk dismissed it with a yawn?

Out of the blue, beyond the pale, perhaps outside our ken
on mornings when the firestorms are overhead again
the silent wonder dawn imparts inspires such questioning
though words and phrasing may have changed we seek one common thing.

By having witnessed secrets here, do questions which occur,
originate within ourselves or outside as it were?

[This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (01-07-2007 03:45 PM).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2007-01-06 01:12 PM

Very much enjoyed the read.
Well done poet Sir.

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2007-01-06 01:13 PM

outstanding

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2007-01-06 01:26 PM

Your beautiful words are proof that they originated inside you, where we touch truth and beauty.

Love,
Margherita

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2007-01-06 01:30 PM

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2007-01-06 02:07 PM

Awesome dear Dr.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
Carl Sandburg

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2007-01-06 02:55 PM

Enjoyed your poem very much.
TD

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

7 posted 2007-01-06 06:26 PM

Wow! You are a wonderful poet.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

8 posted 2007-01-06 11:53 PM

wonderful write! RDB

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2007-01-07 01:19 AM

Excellent poetry writing, Sir.
Hugs,
Ethel

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

10 posted 2007-01-07 10:47 AM

we are live in a mad illusion we create for ourselves
arthur

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

11 posted 2007-01-07 03:31 PM

Enjoyed the read and the thoughts very much!

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

12 posted 2007-01-09 06:41 AM

Enchantress, passing shadows, Margherita, Denise,

Thank you!
Somewhere in time on the yellow brick road
lies Eternity, not too far from where the sun shines in Philadelphia.

Nightshade, This Diamond, SmartChick, Roniece Dawson-Bruce,

And, Thank You!
Just out of reach, by triangulating a position equidistant from Michigan, Qklahoma,and Sydney Australia our roving poet/reporter drops in to thank...

garysgirl, arthur, and Honeybunch,
who have been waiting patiently for a reply
in their respective countries of the USA (Florida), England, and South Africa.

My Thanks to you all.
Doc

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