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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England 
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posted in respect of a poem in Insights called 'The Dangers of Sleep' by 'spritrider87 Dreamland Where do we go, when we go to sleep, Some say, to a ‘mind made’ land. But I feel that we’re drawn, from our bodies at night, To a place that our souls understand. Maybe we need, a refreshment of kind, Relief from our bodily stand. And only in trance can tranquility find, As we glide through our ‘slumbering’ land. Sometimes we remember, what dreams we have seen, Or so we believe, when we wake. But nobody knows where our minds travel to, Or the pathways our journey did take. But I know that my sleep, renews body and soul, So I’m certain, as certain can be. I must have been somewhere, with glorious power, To replenish the ‘life force’ in me. So maybe, while sleeping, we all return home, To the place where all people are free, And bathe in the pool, of the essence of life, Yes, drift in its wonderful sea. No wonder our thoughts are all lost by the morn’, With eons of memories entwined. We’re drunk on the pleasures of millions of souls, On everyone’s lives, we have dined. Now I think that our ‘living’, has part in this feast, We’re all here to gather the vine. And when we return to our essence at last, Our lives should have sweetened the wine. Ivor G Davies The moment created this second, is a moment that's going to last. |
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spritrider87 Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294NH |
this is a glorious poem. i can see what your saying... what did you expect me to do when you left me in the dust just get up and continue on im sorry but i have one other choice. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
... SAVED before I forgot!!! Ivor, I commend you on this divine-ly written poem! Gosh, I am fast-becoming a HUGE fan of your poetry!  Love & God's Light, Linda  |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Great poem and i see what you mean by the response to my poem about sleep. This is my favorite poem from you thus far. Did a excellent job. |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
I seem to be making a group of friends who actually understand my work.... soon cure that! (LOL) |
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