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Open Poetry #40

Where Has She Gone?

trutodaraiders
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since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
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0 posted 2007-01-28 12:28 PM

Where the sweet maiden of courting?
Where the wild firebird of youth?
Vanished and flown - as a wild dove.
Far gone, alas, and forsooth!

Where the great ache and the longing?
Fulfilled... but too swiftly forgot.
And now in its stead- the celibate's bed,
while the fever burns slowly... but hot.

ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10

Posts 739
Chester, England

1 posted 2007-01-28 07:42 AM

Sorry, but I couldn't resist thinking how different this would be if the last two words were
.....on pot!

Have Fun,

Ivor

The moment created this second, is a moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2007-01-28 09:52 AM

"And now in its stead- the celibate's bed,
while the fever burns slowly... but hot."

~ Sounds to me that that maiden is missin' out on a lotta burnin' burnin' love! lol

Linda

trutodaraiders
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since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
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3 posted 2007-01-28 10:12 AM

Ivor lol i see your point

Earth Angel I am still very young and have much love to give (;

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