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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Fishnet Seams Garter to the west slides inches as miles Hot pink expressions raised impressionable smiles Part caricature, unexpected per don A spontaneous gesture impromptu put on Illusion perchance, in the height of romance Candy the view, of symbolically France Yet the pattern foretells deeper spared wishing wells Diamond stencil avails, in accent of the swells An adjustment maybe, up and east just to see Smoothing slight of the eye, o’er the hand blissfully Should that not be enough, garter landed the bluff Peel the thigh to the toe whether easy or rough Turn the style into wish, of an excellent dish Garter stays to sun days dragging waves for a fish Copyright Kkh 1/27/07 |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
A delightful piece of writing. Enjoyed this. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oui, oui....oui.....Awwww river durcheeee... Nicely done K. excellent visuals of the "net"..... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD.....It is always such a pleasure to read your verse!!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
delightful TD! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
ok...I've read this multiple times for 3 days straight...and I like it better every time...quite enjoyable |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ThisDiamond Fish net seams are made of dreams I'd call this the dance of symbols theme |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A most enjoyable read Kathleen!  In the midst of winter, |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
This is great... clever and really a joy to read! I love it! Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This is one of your Best!!!!!!!! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
So fun! I smiled and enjoyed each word. Kind of like a good dessert for my mind. A |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oooo La La! Great write, Kathleen! *hugs*...jo |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
A fantastic write, Kathleen. |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Love the way you weave your words. Excellent write. MoonShadow . |
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