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alone but not lonely
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alone but not lonely |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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alone but not lonely night whispers decide me prancing music carefree in occurrence as I drift away, heart bursting silence is my lover remembering touch of rivers flowering pleasure of overflowing banks sitting on a beach chair sipping joy juice holding hands & smiling we’re generally keen in a beautiful holiday a handshake of freedom linked to compassionate summer finding what I’ve longed for what seems to be forever witchery magic flying ocean carpet secrets carry me toward destiny here all things believe and plays with light in the mind soothing heaven in the heart lovable piano together sweet tones and lyrics tapping into my life like gregory hines as the end of each day melts holding me close in the middle of this park my mystery unfolds into hopes and dreams from eyes that explode meticulous pose bringing the ghost closer, closer… how far thoughts generate nature’s window dressed in green it is all I've dreamed of and more [This message has been edited by LeeJ (01-26-2007 10:54 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ You dream good. Enjoyed the read. And have a wonderful day.  |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
You are 1 of the best I know at free verse. I enjoyed the read. Painted a nice picture here for the reader |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Happy noon time, Lovely Lee! ~ Gosh, where did the morning go?!? "silence is my lover remembering touch of rivers flowering pleasure of overflowing banks sitting on a beach chair sipping joy juice holding hands & smiling" Hold that thought! It's a beauty and one that will remain with me as well! You exude beauty, both on the out and on the in! You have an exeptional talent and spirit.   Linda LOL I just reread my reply and I cracked up laughing. Some may get the wrong impression when my response came after ("sitting on a beach chair sipping joy juice holding hands & smiling") |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Hi Lee, very nice poem. I was caught by the title, because those are the exact words our Queen Mother used as a title to her biography, many many years ago. Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Lee , I loved this , may you always have continuous hopes and dreams Hope |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
made me smile this morning Lee... always a joy to read you  M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I love being alone. It seldom happens here though. But when it does? I have a private party. (and you can take that anyway you like  ) |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This so very desirable a condition....how does one attain it, starting from the precise opposite? Perhaps they don't....at least, I haven't found it. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ [This message has been edited by Ratleader (01-27-2007 10:52 PM).] |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"silence is my lover" sets the tone and those last two lines... awesome write LeeJ |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Still love your outlook, mind, and wisdom, LeeJ... -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You reached into my mind and pulled these words out, LeeJ.....amazing. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Lee, I love this. Alone is only in distance and time, eh? I like how you capture that part of love. Another keeper! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
LeeJ... just beautiful ! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
for what seems to be forever witchery magic flying ocean carpet secrets carry me toward destiny here all things believe and plays with light in the mind soothing heaven in the heart ~AHO~ LeeJ,so many can not understand to be alone yet not lonely,one can not find true peace until they can be alone with just themselves and know good company there! Listen well sister,to the secrets the Waters are telling! do you see all the water secrets in the posts of today? blessings
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Hi LeeJ...We Poets are never alone, for our thoughts are our companions, and solitude is sought after to bring them to fruition. How fortunate we are indeed!  Bea |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Dreamers are never alone. Beautiful write. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Very beautiful indeed... I am one who can be alone and not lonely, insisting on having time to myself, so your writing captured all those feelings I have never been able to express with the brilliance which you have so done. Awesome write! Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"witchery magic flying ocean carpet secrets carry me toward destiny here all things believe and plays with light in the mind soothing heaven in the heart lovable piano together sweet tones and lyrics tapping into my life like gregory hines as the end of each day melts" Your mind and your heart melding. Lovely write Lee J. JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
"tapping into my life like gregory hines" I always kinda felt like he stomped more than tapped Otherwise, I loved it Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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