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My Creation
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My Creation |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite: My Creation My creation, an art a point Illusion of a minds anoint The whisper of a moment’s dare A pixel of the way I care Aphasia of our common sense A light that looks for recompense The spirit of a phantoms course A giving of my soul its source It is a statement made by you As beautiful as mornings dew An act that plays upon times stage An addendum an added page It is a force of raging fire Unclear to see with much of mire A stirring up of inter core An opening of chaos door A place I often go in dream A place I keep my own harem |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Sonneteering Sultan ~ I be one who'd delight in being a part of your "harem".  Even if you could not speak, your pen would contine to eloquently speak for you.  Loving hug, EA |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I just love to read your creations. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A wonderful write dear Sy! May I join your harem too?   &  , NancyIn the midst of winter, |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
seems everyone would like to join your harem Sir Sy I am no exception... |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Always a pleasure to read your well flowing writes. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel, LOL you are already in my dream harem. SmartChick, And I love for you to read them. Nancy, Why you were one of the first. Lady It would be my pleasure. sewasham As you can see from the above, I try my best LOL |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
I would love to be part of that harem My spirit will rise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES You were always in. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
An artiste's point is pure delight a point au prints in sum, some nights a care du pont of quickened heights a shine to shadow the darkest nights... paint away, m'friend! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Sir Sy.... oh my, oh my!! just wonderful!  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, I'll do my best.   RDB, Thank you for your wonderful reply. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
oh, oh, (waving hand in the air frantically) can I be part of the herum to? Oh polizzzeeee? Great write dear Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Only if you take me with you in one of your dreams. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ From behind a mask of silken smile I would dance within your wile~ Ah, to only be a part of the harem of your heart~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thankyou ~ My spirit will rise |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I don't know what this was before but echoes of it roll to my door it has a certain style and flair but with you that's always there I don't know what it was before but your words leave me dumb, word poor because you write with elegance that speaks loud of your eloquence everything you write and say has memories of another day where reading you, my daily brew made me well content with you and all the things you showed me of were penned in pages blue with love so how do I do less than this I seal this answer with my bliss and say I've heard this once before but still it leaves me wanting more. a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, But you are a part of the harem of my heart. MGROVES No I you.Kethry, This is as elegant as it gets. thank you. |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
A place I often go in dream A place I keep my own harem Where in the shadow of my rhyme Springs poetry to join with mine In whispers of a moments dare Entwined within the soul we share. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ivor, Yes I believe the Hindu religion believes in the one soul. Thank you for a wonderful reply. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana Thank you dear. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Seymour, It's such a treat to read your poetry once again. It is always music to my ears. Two lines keep repeating themselves to me: "A stirring up of inter core An opening of chaos door" Enjoyed immensely! miscellanea |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
miscellanea Good lines I like them to. Thank you |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
love yaMy spirit will rise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES, Too |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
 I'm taking belly dancing lessions Sy...got room for one more? Bea |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bea, You betcha. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I don't know how in the world this one got past me but hopefully you'll allow the late-sleepers to join? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Never turned one down yet. LOL |
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