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ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
Posts 739
Chester, England

0 posted 2007-07-13 07:03 PM


This was written quite a few years ago when I was going through a very bad period following the death of our daughter.  Though Joan had exactly the same to deal with as me, this was written as a tribute to how she supported me through this and through the rest of my life.


Joan

Joan now says that she could panic,
but she must stay right on track.
Says it’s her turn for a breakdown
but no time to think like that.

Yet again she bears my burden
working hours both day and night.
Making sure whatever happens
we’re prepared to stand and fight.

Though Joan’s only five foot nothing,
no bigger girl I’ve ever seen.
Shoulders all life can throw at her,
most would break where she has been.

She’s the one who’s strong and able,
always had to carry on.
As a wife and loving mother,
woman’s work is never done.

Now you know why I don’t worry
when my backs against a wall.
With the love of my good woman
always there to break my fall.

So when I write about my feelings
please remember how I stand.
Leaning on my children’s mother,
together always hand in hand.

Ivor G Davies


The moment created this second, is a  moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.

© Copyright 2007 Ivor G Davies - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2007-07-13 07:14 PM


Nice writing...Its nice to have the support of those you love when going through hard times...James
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
2 posted 2007-07-13 07:55 PM


dear sir, it is sad to read your story. But you poem truly tells that a beautiful spirit will be forever living in your life.

beautiful sir.

wish you well.

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