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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Drink Subtle forces wane Of the sucking heat Cotton mouthed July Berries puckered drain Wishing cool repeat Bluest skies belie Rasp of honor stain Forlorn flora mete Air in distant sigh Praying for the rain Limbs upturned to greet Full-cheeked clouds deny Thundering with pain Poured in dark deceit When the heavens cry Swelled applause again Broad and spectral feat Supple vines reply Copyright Kkh 7/11/07 |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Thundering with pain Poured in dark deceit When the heavens cry" Great write TD. JL  What I used to do with one hand tied behind my back now requires every muscle in my body, cohesively. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
goodness now I'm thirsty! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I am especially fond of: "Thundering with pain Poured in dark deceit When the heavens cry... Broad and spectral feat Supple vines reply (!)" This write captures 'Dog-day' summertime rather well! |
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