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The Moon |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite: The Moon Where is that ghost of circles light? That host that lit my phantoms night That ghostly lavaliere of sky Where does it hide, where does it lie? No moon of magic can I find Could it be I’m going blind? Yet I know it still glows gold Could it be I’m growing old? Where is that moon I used to know? That shined a phantoms fancies glow That fired all that alchemy That set my heart and minds a spree? It wears a shroud a lace of web It airs a cloud of subtle ebb It’s turned from gold to silvers glare Chilled of ice and gray of wear I’m dancing me a tenuous rhyme As sands slip down to end my time |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
aw Sey, you are immortal in our hearts sir.  and this is another fine write. Hugs you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dear Sy..you, getting old? Never! Come we shall find the light of the silvery moon together.  &  , NancyIn the midst of winter, |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
This is a keeper Sy. Well done!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Sir Sy.... just wonderful - just like you!!  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit You are indeed a gentle spirit. Nancy, Its lost the luster of its shine And interaction of its wine. Thank you dear. scorpio Thank you my friend. RDB, You are kind indeed. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
no mere moon could outshine you Sir Sy beautiful... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady You are a dear lady. |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
The Moon shines brightly in that place where poets meet with charm and grace To pass the wisdom of the time in perfect poetry in rhyme Your Moon shines brightly with the tides that carry us along your rides when taken to fantastic shores where from your pen pure magic pours. The Sun and Moon come out to play to brighten up our every day whenever Seymour has his say we'll learn a little more that day. Seymour, It is 4am in the morning here and I'm in a hotel 300 miles from home ready to hold a meeting tomorrow, couldn't sleep and would thank you for a little (moon)light relief in the middle of the night! Ivor |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ivor Your reply was as good as my poem. Thank you and have a good one tomorrow. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Seymour, you are the best of the best...you give us older folks, dignity and reason for rhyme...wonderfully rich and wise you are... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Thank you my dear you are a sweetheart. Have a good one. |
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