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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2007-07-12 06:48 AM



it wasn't easy unwinding my mind
but your bare shoulders had handles
that knew where my hands needed to be

to spin my stones like a tipsy turve
and you said it was in the water
and the warm of other's eyes

knowing you were being watched
that made you afraid enough
to burrow into old bone leather

looking for armor without amour
just for the moments of exploration
until you got your boots back on

and swayed back into the saddle of my hands


____________

daark




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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2007-07-12 07:44 AM


soft smile sighs here D.


yep,

that word.


aziza
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2 posted 2007-07-12 10:29 AM


You know, I like this.  It brings a smile and a wonderful picture in my mind.

A

The Lady
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3 posted 2007-07-12 08:22 PM




ahhh being watched
in the saddle of your hands
stranger darlin'

might I say you titilate?

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2007-07-13 06:45 AM


ms gs, thanks lady friend

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ms az, it is a lovely picture I presume, thanks babe

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ladyone, thanks for watching ms, you are a blessing

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2007-07-14 02:17 AM


and the warm of other's eyes...

mmm yes, I like this!  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2007-07-14 07:12 AM


ms R & B thanks for the read
divine chaos
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dancing 'neath the moon
7 posted 2007-07-14 08:10 AM


i'm always glad to find you here
when I come tiptoeing through the blue
you always leave me with a smile .. and a sigh

~sheli

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2007-07-14 09:46 AM


it is always a pleasure to see your eyes on my words, thank you
BBGrrl
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9 posted 2007-09-05 03:57 PM


Are you telling my story?  I felt this daark.
Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2007-09-06 06:45 AM


only if you have the time to listen?

thanks ms

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