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secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2007-07-11 10:28 PM


     A Land Called Tamaran

Beyond the sunset hills
and twilight vales of time,
lies a land called Tamaran…
where wrinkled lightning flashes
through a flickering-forest
  canopy,
in a pyrotechnic fantasy
of ancestral voices whisper-chanting
  along a sacred sea…
as wistful, marching monoliths
sing a stony-sorrow’s sad refrain
beneath the pale-blue light
from lost stars shivering
  in a cosmic dream
of transcending hope...
  for universal love!


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2007-07-11 10:40 PM


Where can I purchase a ticket?


Drauntz
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2 posted 2007-07-12 01:40 AM


wonderful again.

enjoyed

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2007-07-12 06:17 AM


Exquisite imagery! I've booked my flight!
Robert Jordan
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4 posted 2007-07-12 08:25 AM


Secondhanddreampoet,

This is a nice, well constructed long sentence.

Bobby

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5 posted 2007-07-12 05:39 PM


What a great place for poets and other artists to live! An ephemeral mirage you've conjured up that we can revisit when we sigh ...
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