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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. You’d be proud I’ve pretty much avoided The mistakes you made There’s money in the bank Plenty of food There’s nothing I need I can’t really have When it’s time to come I’ll drink sake And you Dark Eye vodka For the cold We’ll shoot clothespins Sharing a BB gun Among the clouds Just to let you know I left a cigar here On the ground I won’t tell Ma . |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
gripping |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thanks Helen John . |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Beautiful and stark You left me feeling loss |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thank you Alison John . |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
I agree, before and after. [This message has been edited by Drauntz (07-11-2007 10:29 PM).] |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
Fantastic. I have always liked your work |
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Hyaunt Member
since 2007-07-12
Posts 74 |
This is good and will be informed. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I've pretty much stopped giving a crap whether my family is proud of me or not dad could die and I'd never know and I told my brother what I thought about him back at Christmas and he stopped running my life then freedom never felt so good |
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