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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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0 posted 2007-07-11 05:15 PM


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Bobbers
Beyond
Green lily pads

Summer shadows
Under the willow’s leaves

Sunset
Upon
A calm river

Water
Under an iron bridge


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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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1 posted 2007-07-11 07:49 PM



Sir Yi Huan, mine is better

"Under an iron bridge
Water
A calm river
Upon Sunset

Under the willow’s leaves
Summer shadows

Green lily pads
Beyond Bobbers"

Have a very good night sir.

Beautiful!!!

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
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2 posted 2007-07-11 09:17 PM


John, you captured the lazy joy of watching a bobber as it floats among those summer shadows - and beyond them.

Alison

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