Open Poetry #40 |
7/11 |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Bobbers Beyond Green lily pads Summer shadows Under the willow’s leaves Sunset Upon A calm river Water Under an iron bridge . |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Sir Yi Huan, mine is better "Under an iron bridge Water A calm river Upon Sunset Under the willow’s leaves Summer shadows Green lily pads Beyond Bobbers" Have a very good night sir. Beautiful!!! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
John, you captured the lazy joy of watching a bobber as it floats among those summer shadows - and beyond them. Alison |
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