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I Tell You - OH! - I Tell You...
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I Tell You - OH! - I Tell You... |
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Ketooaina Junior Member
since 2007-04-20
Posts 37Nucla, Colorado |
My soul was seized by a sense of Heavenly irridescence. I had felt freedom, loftiness. In your arms I am in paradise. Your love laps at me like tongues of fire. Your love soars through me like rapturous tremors. How can I describe these feelings of miraculous bliss? I cry out to you. I tell you - OH! - I tell you...I love you! I'd give my life for you! Would you not do the same for me? Reaching out to you with trembling hands... I deliriously beseech your indulgence. A miracle occured! I suddenly caught sight of love shining brightly in youy diamond eyes. Your love soars through me like rapturous tremors. How can I describe these feelings of miraculous bliss? I cry out to you. I tell you - OH! - I tell you...I love you! I'd give my life for you! Would you not do the same for me? You smile faintly. I soon seem to merge into one wonderous, continuous being. You come to me...slowly...stealth-like. Your love soars through me like rapturous tremors. How can I describe these feelings of miraculous bliss? I cry out to you. I tell you - OH! - I tell you...I love you! I'd give my life for you! Would you not do the same for me? You whisper softly in my ear... Telling me tales of your wants for me. I'm overcome suddenly by your sweet lips over mine... Sharing power, hunger...love. Would you not do this for me? I tell you - OH! - I tell you...I love you! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
what a beautiful romantic poem to read at midnight. much enjoyed |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Lots of passion in this poem. Good job. Alison |
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