Open Poetry #40 |
Hummingbird's Mimosa |
Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Above a Mimosa tree with flowers going to seed, dripping down pink to the ground, green; hark, the stir of wings. Holding on to air is the quickening sound; don't dare interrupt the flow; make quiet your watch, not caught. The dignity of a spear assaults the flowing tresses bunched and pressed there; leaning into the drifting breeze, cuddled in quiet wait to fall from tree. Lithe with zip-twirl, the road an airway; it supped at bird-stop, filled-up with sweetest fuel, then stopped before my wonder-face and dared the air between us, then was gone. Above a Mimosa tree, holding on to air, the dignity of a spear lithe with zip-twirl ... hark, the quiet stir of wings. |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
This painted a wonderful picture. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
your zip-twirl fascinates me Martie beautiful poem... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Marti, you paint visions and sights better than most dream of being able to do. A joy to read,to see and smell |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
very fine and interesting 'write'! sustained applause!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Martie....only you could write "dared the air between us" |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
What a beautiful picture you paint here with your words Ruth |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"then stopped before my wonder-face and dared the air between us, " Ahhhhhh ... can you see my smile from here, Martie? How I love these little creatures. They are natures very best work of art ... and you've captured them beautifully. Much enjoyed this! Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I love to sit and watch a hummingbird flitter and flutter around. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieSis~ Those little birds of hum just make me want to smile~ Love this, Sis~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
then stopped before my wonder-face and dared the air between us, ~*~ ah, those slip-silver moments... |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
"then stopped before my wonder-face and dared the air between us, then was gone." So Magical. I adore your nature eyes. You always put me right there with you. Thanks so much for that. Love, reg |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
wonderful Martie - I have seen that tree and now i see the humingbird - you paint wonderful pictures - Paul |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I've seen butterflies in the mimosas many times... but hadn't seen a hummingbird in one until now, through your words. *S* Beautiful!! |
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