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DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
Why are you so bewitching? I know your touch sees deep into my heart How does your fingers cast spells Sorting my mixed emotions apart Keeping them from switching Making lust back to love as we start Walking hand in hand, heart in heart; Why are you so bewitching? |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I thought this was so telling, sweet and subtle... You exposed (my perception of) the male heart here...and what you did say in your poem, made a statement so powerfully more  Great write! |
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Robert Jordan Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392Philadelphia Pa USA |
Dennis, Try: How do your fingers cast spells Bobby |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"I know your touch sees deep into my heart" beautifully done Dennis |
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