»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #40
»
Dusk
| Open Poetry #40 |
|
Dusk |
|
|
paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan 
|
dusk has fallen all around casting shadows everywhere forever changing images darkening with time looking for some meaning as this darkness grows peering so intensely movement is implied impressions are accepted interpretations are made blackness wipes the slate clean for another day |
||
| © Copyright 2007 Paulette - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Paulette This is lovely. I love the darkness of night .. and it is one thing I miss in summer. We have no dark. Alison |
||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
||
|
wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
good stuff especially the last stanza |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I sure wish it was dusk right now...I have a hard time sleeping in the daylight midnight shift stinks |
||
|
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I REALLY like this ‘write’!! [so much grand-fine potential for multiple interpretations; etc.] seriously sustained applause!! [I only wish my ‘slate’ could be ‘wiped clean’ for some ‘brave new day’!] |
||
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I felt the ominous essence that sometimes accompanies dusk within these words. Well done, poet! |
||
|
Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
a beauty to enjoy. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
