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in the studio |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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in the studio on Main and Charleston he holds court astride a stool elegance and paint staining soft brown fingers hat over his right eye sounds like Mingus smells like cigarette smoke just cleaned brushes tip up in a jar black linen dresses wander among his Cuernavaca angels circling the room Pollock haunting the walls fresh cheese blowsy red tomatoes fruit wine glasses in thin diamond fingers hunger sits on the air with one eye I adore skin of his neck where last my lips touched down the side of his smirk whispers real art begins when these strangers wander into the night then I paint Chagall crazy and you sing Dinah in love |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Really enjoyed. You have a way with words, look forward for more from you. Tomer |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oh, but you do have a way with painting a mood or moment. Good one...made me hungry. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Tomer hungry for tomatoes and cheese Barry? you know I appreciate your words thank you |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
the side of his smirk whispers real art begins when these strangers wander into the night then I paint Chagall crazy and you sing Dinah in love You know how I love your endings.... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Monklet I love writing endings but hate coming to them |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I am loving you because you share yourself with such incredible beauty --- And I am hungry too ... ... for more of your poetry. A |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you for your lovely reply Alison  |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Lady, this penning gave the mood, one so enjoyed. I liked this line, it spoke of passion and remembrance. Well done my friend. Rick "hunger sits on the air with one eye I adore skin of his neck where last my lips touched down" |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Rick thank you for your kind reply |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Lady Kate.. will there be more?? loved this! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, can almost taste the dark cocoa simmering silently..enjoyed it ms |
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Aloneinmyhead Junior Member
since 2007-07-08
Posts 30Tennessee |
This is so beautiful. I am glad there is still love in the world. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Roniece, my friend thank you for your reply I think there may be more stranger darlin’ I love sharing flavors with you so am I, Alone so am I thank you |
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