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secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2007-07-07 01:55 PM


         Castle Isle

A fine adventurine-sky
deepens to midnight blue
behind the march
of silent-silhouette trees
along the crest of ‘Castle’ Isle,
across a sunset-crimson sea
of dark-turquoise waves
breaking in a rocky mix,
of mist and sea-stars
shining on the lonely beach…
lost to time’s abandon!



© Copyright 2007 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
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1 posted 2007-07-07 02:08 PM


ah, if you keep writing like this, i surly would be chocked to death by its fineness because when i read it, i lost my breath, and my mind fainted.
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2007-07-07 04:32 PM


Enjoyed...James
paullallady
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3 posted 2007-07-07 08:01 PM


a true poet of imagery.  wonderful.
aziza
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4 posted 2007-07-07 11:02 PM


Colorful, visual and so lovely.  You spark my imagination -- thank you for the lovely you bring to my life.

Alison

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Gaia
5 posted 2007-07-08 12:20 PM


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ArtSolstice
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6 posted 2007-07-09 08:50 PM


Is this place near the Elysian Fields? It sounds beautiful enough to be... !
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