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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-07-07 07:18 AM

Wallowing

My love so sweet,
from the spring
of your love
I drink,
worrying not
of today
but wondering
about tomorrow.
Soon enough
my love so sweet,
shall you depart from
this love so sweet
leaving me wallowing
in my sorrow.

Jameslee
7July
2007

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2007-07-07 07:23 AM

oh James, we don't want you wallowing too long gorgeous boy... I do enjoy your words.. RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2007-07-07 08:11 AM

I don't know what it is about the word "wallowing" ... but it's one of those unique words that is so descriptive in and of itself. Your poem captured the title well, James. Much enjoyed.

Best wishes,
/Kit

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2007-07-07 10:13 AM

hon, get to tomorrow when it comes

no use in worrying at all, about anything...whatever's meant to be will be

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2007-07-07 04:24 PM

Thank you Roneice, Kit and passing for your kind words of encouragement...James

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

5 posted 2007-07-08 07:22 PM

very good one. From singing romance to whining romance. gooood!!!

beautiful.

enjoyed

Dominique-Simone
Senior Member

since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

6 posted 2007-07-08 07:39 PM

Hold onto the day you have now. Tomorrow might not be as sunny. Great poem

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

7 posted 2007-07-08 10:25 PM

it was the word wallow that brought me here
excellent poem James
great word, wallow

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

8 posted 2007-07-11 04:28 PM

I love a good wallow
and you write of one with
such eloquence and beauty, James.

Alison

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

9 posted 2007-07-11 04:34 PM

LOL James....sorry.

We all just wallow to the hole dries and we find another, my friend. It's the interlude between wallows that so enjoyable ... until we find a permanent spot....then it's all good!

jwesley

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