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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-07-06 01:44 PM


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how barely
the green leaves move
in the street lamp’s
light

there is no expectation
the moment inarticulate
an absence in what is past

recall or if at all
a subtle tremble
beneath the bough

without heart or thought
sense of consequence
for who it can not feel


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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-07-06 02:45 PM


How softly
the stars jump in and out my eyes
How cheerfully
They inks the guest book tonight
How ardently
They embrace the newly found light
To comfort the dream
That lost between the blink of time.

The Lunar Eclipse


passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2007-07-07 10:23 AM


reminds me of the nights at the paper mill

the steam rising, looking like ghosts who are lost

sorry, I'm a little tired this morning and maybe thinking too much for my mood


Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2007-07-07 12:42 PM


I enjoy the subtlety of your writing.
There is a Zen feel to it.

Love and Light,

EA

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