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Touching Tomorrow
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Touching Tomorrow |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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I stare at the ceiling listen to the tick of clock surrounding me in this silence solitude and memories.. precious moments shared and oh God, how it hurts this aching twists my heart driving deeper this missing something so simple as the sound of your voice. It is then that I close my eyes, hear the music of our yesterdays song and like a balm it soothes with an unspoken promise of soon we shall be together again with fingertips entwined touching tomorrow. No more hangin' on to the past No more filling up my tomorrows With yesterday's sorrows No more lookin' over my shoulder {T.Tritt} |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
wow, you must write this down in one breath. beautiful, quite and soft. beautiful truly |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you know this touches Donna...I understand it and feel it  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Drauntz, not in one breath at all, probably more like several with lots of bad words under my breath..  before it is finally completed. Thank youSea, yes........I KNOW you do and thank you for listening to me whine.  James, thank you so much for stopping by.  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"together again with fingertips entwined touching tomorrow." you knew you would catch me here gentle Donna beauty big hugs |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Donna Maybe not in one breath, but I couldn't breathe as I read this. It is lovely - just lovely. Alison |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Donna... simply stunning write! Nice to see your beautiful smiling face RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Donna, Nothing provides hope like the courage to dream. Well done. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
This was beautiful, filled with love and hopes of tomorrow, very much enjoyed, thank you for sharing. Rick |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
missing something so simple ~*~ One of your most gentle touches... |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I Loved this Donna, and your new photo is gorgeous! The darker hair suits you! J. M. Barrie, the playwright, may have said it best when he wrote, “God gave us memories so that we might have roses in December.” |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and like a balm it soothes with an unspoken promise of soon we shall be together again with fingertips entwined touching tomorrow. I have one word...Wow!!!! Terrific Write and read...sad, sad, sad... well done poetess lady! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
touching words that most can understand, Donna~~ love the new picture M |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I love this more today than I did the first time that I read it. xoxoxo Alison |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Beautiful! JL What I used to do with one hand tied behind my back now requires every muscle in my body, cohesively. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
and oh God, how it hurts this aching twists my heart driving deeper this missing something so simple as the sound of your voice. Oh, my goodness... YES!!! *S* And what a beautiful image... touching tomorrow. *S* |
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