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Open Poetry #40

My thoughts explode

Rick
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

0 posted 2007-07-06 03:04 AM

I sit and all my thoughts explode
Again I’m in my writing mode
Taking break to shed my load
In this time now I share

I do not know what words will be
Until they’re down and I can see
And then they somehow comfort me
With feelings that seem rare

I start a line and more do come
And then appears another one
Such moments when I’m having fun
With all thats written there

Ten minutes, then the poem I save
Before it hits the cyber grave
Cos that’s how modern things behave
And loss would be unfair

Then I post if off and smile
As it onward goes each mile
My creation, my own style
That now I give to share

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

1 posted 2007-07-06 03:11 AM

thanks for sharing, When I get the words in my head, I come here, not knowing what all will be said, The words usually just flow from my fingers, I am so glad for this place, before only I read what I wrote,now I write more, without any fears, and find words of wisdom, smiles, or at times something I need to hear. I am enjoying your thoughts, I got a lot of catching up to do, been gone a while.

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Rick
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

2 posted 2007-07-06 06:09 AM

MGROVES, nice to have your company and thoughts, a bond of exchange and words shared through friendship. Enjoy your moments and write away my friend, enjoying your replies.

Rick

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

3 posted 2007-07-06 08:34 AM

very good. very good indeed.

enjoyed

Rick
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

4 posted 2007-07-06 09:12 AM

Drauntz, again thank you my friend, so glad you are enjoying my posts.

Rick

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