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Half-light |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
The half-light warms these scenes as though within each reminisce are sparks rekindled even now, should one imagine this. That somewhere there remains a sign where two had passed before eclipsed, but not erased by moons and tides on distant shores. A circle looped upon itself emblazoned in the sand, its' embers formed of memories, thus able to withstand the passage from where fantasy and our beliefs connect, as spirits roaming 'neath the stars give time pause to reflect. In half-light where remains outlined a symbol with a twist, and eyes gaze on a universe wherein such things exist. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful and beautiful poem. Half-light .. I like this title. enjoyed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm in awe of this writing well done! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 What a delight, to discover this! You've captured the essence of timelessness, shining the spotlight on these souls in a fine 'half-light' poem. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Doc....Your quiet circle of reflections touches mine with thoughts of infinity. Thank you for this and the lovely thoughts behind it.  |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Drauntz, Thank you . Doc passing shadows, This one practically wrote itself, sometimes they seem to come out better the less I meddle with them.Thanks. Doc Midnitesun, Thank you. I returned to a theme that Serenity and I had explored together a long way back for this, of course, when your subject is timeless, what's a few years here and there? Doc Martie, Thank you, a "circle of reflections" indeed, I consider myself very fortunate to have people such as yourself within it. Doc |
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