Open Poetry #40 |
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"Stars of Night" |
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Arius Miura de Galdri Member
since 2007-07-04
Posts 90Michigan, USA ![]() |
"Stars of Night" They’re mirrored on the water as they shimmer in the sky The light they shed is overlooked by many, even I Glowing brightly from the darkened blanket where they lie Watching from above us as around the world they fly Gazing down on those they know and those they’ve yet to meet The light they cast before us helps to guide our wandering feet The comfort from their glow can lead us down the darkest street As lovingly they watch us from upon their lofty seat Yet even when forgotten they cease not their lovely gleam Bright pinpoints of heaven through the veil of night they seem Gazing down upon us as we sleep and as we dream The enemies of darkness for eternity, I deem AMdG "My candle burns at both ends; it will not last the night; but ah, my foes, and oh, my friends--it gives a lovely light!" -"First Fig" by Edna St. Vi |
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FunnyBones Junior Member
since 2007-07-04
Posts 13 |
and quietly they speak to me and say you have to wake and face another day. tho' while I slumber everything is gray the sunshine comes to make another day |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I like it that you have already imposed on a reader the sense to respond to your poetry. That is a great compliment. Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions. The stars are prettiest here. TD |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
May it be that your star shines brighter than any of the universe, enjoyed your glowing beauty of poetry! WELCOME TO PASSIONS IN POETRY! ~ARH |
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RogueandPoet Member
since 2007-06-04
Posts 126Oregon |
Wonderful rhythm. An elegant piece. |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Thankfully so that ![]() |
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