Open Poetry #40 |
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One Day |
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matthew hallman Junior Member
since 2007-07-04
Posts 10 |
One Day I lay down my head and dream of a day that will change my life forever. I cant seem to think of anything but this day. Why I ask myself, why do I dream of this day why cant I dream of another. This dream my dream is to be next to you. I dream of a fire and candles the sent of pine fills my head and warms my body. She looks over at me looking into my eyes she says everything I’ve ever wanted to here I love you so much. My heart pounds and my eyes cloud. One tear rolls down my cheek and I open my mouth I cant seem to say anything. My head is racing my heart is pounding harder then ever before. I look her in her eyes and I smile I move forwards and kiss her gentle lips. This kiss, O this kiss makes my body shake I never want to stop, I know she feels the same way I back my head away and look her in her eyes my heart slows and my head stops racing she wants to know what im thinking so I smile and tell her I love u more then I could ever tell you. Now her eyes fill I don’t want here to cry I want to see her smile I reach up and touch her face I feel the warmth of her skin I kiss her softly and lay down my head. I awake from my dream when I do I smile and go one day, one day this day will be mine. Mine forever Mine to love Matthew R. Hallman |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Matthew~ This is just lovely ... welcome to PiP~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
What do I hear? your heart crying, like that of a lonely dove cooing , longing for its soulmate! You have presented a grand entrance, Sir Matthew, please pull up a seat, tells us more, and fill our hearts with warmth. WELCOME TO PASSIONS IN POETRY! ~ARH |
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MGROVES![]() ![]()
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
soul and heart felt~ My spirit will rise |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
This is lovely. Welcome to PiP and I hope to read more of your writing. A |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Welcome Matthew! This is quite exquisite writing... looking forward to more.. RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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