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matthew hallman
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0 posted 2007-07-04 02:57 AM



One Day


I lay down my head and dream
of a day that will change my life forever.
I cant seem to think of anything but this day.
Why I ask myself, why do I dream of this day
why cant I dream of another.

This dream
my dream is to be next to you.
I dream of a fire and candles
the sent of pine fills my head and warms my body.
She looks over at me
looking into my eyes she says everything I’ve ever wanted to here
I love you so much.

My heart pounds and my eyes cloud.
One tear rolls down my cheek and I open my mouth
I cant seem to say anything.
My head is racing
my heart is pounding harder then ever before.
I look her in her eyes and I smile
I move forwards and kiss her gentle lips.

This kiss, O this kiss makes my body shake
I never want to stop, I know she feels the same way
I back my head away and look her in her eyes
my heart slows and my head stops racing
she wants to know what im thinking so I smile and tell her
I love u more then I could ever tell you.

Now her eyes fill
I don’t want here to cry
I want to see her smile
I reach up and touch her face
I feel the warmth of her skin
I kiss her softly and lay down my head.

I awake from my dream
when I do I smile and go one day,
one day this day will be mine.
Mine forever
Mine to love

Matthew R. Hallman

© Copyright 2007 Matthew R. Hallman - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2007-07-04 09:04 AM


Matthew~
This is just lovely ... welcome to PiP~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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A Romantic Heart
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2 posted 2007-07-05 11:07 PM


What do I hear? your heart crying, like that of a lonely dove cooing , longing for its soulmate!

You have presented a grand entrance, Sir Matthew, please pull up a seat, tells us more, and fill our hearts with warmth.

WELCOME TO PASSIONS IN POETRY!

~ARH

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3 posted 2007-07-06 12:06 PM


soul and heart felt~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2007-07-06 05:11 PM


Nice writing...James
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5 posted 2007-07-08 04:11 AM


This is lovely.
Welcome to PiP and I hope to read more of your writing.

A

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2007-07-08 04:14 AM


Welcome Matthew!  This is quite exquisite writing... looking forward to more..  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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