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Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

0 posted 2007-07-03 03:12 PM

I see you come
You come sweetly into my eyes
in such a seceret sigh

From faraway
Passing through the stare of the stars
Young and old
Did you say hello to them?
Did you bring me their regards?
How you escape from the tongue of the ogre
How do you avoid those greedy hand?
now, tell me,
my love
The story of the first ray
the very beginning of the light
who enticed you to smile a universe
in hydrogen?
or in Une?

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2007-07-05 09:27 PM

I saw this loved one as the sun...lovely feel to this write. Enjoyed the read.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2007-07-06 03:22 AM

"who enticed you to smile a universe"

Loved that. Sometimes things just come naturally.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2007-07-06 09:06 AM

You have illustrated that there can be such a thing as poetry in science! Right brain meets left! lol

Uniquely exquisite!

Love & Light,

EA

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

4 posted 2007-07-06 09:23 AM

Drauntz, you could be speaking of God here dear friend or alien love, great wording, i was captured till the ending, thanks for sharing.

Rick

Dominique-Simone
Senior Member

since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

5 posted 2007-07-06 10:21 AM

This was brilliant!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2007-07-07 05:27 PM

you have taken me past the stars with this
Drauntz

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2007-07-08 12:54 PM

To the top...James

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

8 posted 2007-07-08 03:17 AM

you make me smile, Mz. D

(and yeah, I'm out of kiwi...)

Brava

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

9 posted 2007-07-08 03:26 AM

I like this, Drauntz.
Very good .. and interesting.

A

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

10 posted 2007-07-08 03:24 PM

Drauntz,
Flying high, indeed.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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